Running out of time

This one was an instermental to start with..But i just found it boring like that.
SO, i added a Mantar to the first half.
Really is a "guitar" tune tho.
Bass is Ok i guess...not liking the bass line to much.

I see what you mean about the bass. It's not bad. Just not entirely sure
it works. maybe hold some notes longer? or do some downward slides?

love the guitar at 1:30. SO TASTY!

I like when the bass does the slow descending riff. I'm just not sure about
the faster dio-like part.

Nicely surrounding me with sound.

And the ending is nice too.

Z

Yes.....Its pissing me off pretty bad..Cant get anything to go together.
Deleted the last few i did.
Im doing bass first...that might be the prob??
But i dont think so. Allways done the bass first, So??
Im just gona stop recording for awhile.
Last thing i need right now is something eles pissing me off.

Guitar sounds pretty crapy also. As do the vocals.
I really dont know what to do about life, OR my music???
Its all fucked up.....Im just gona try to do nothing with both for awhile.

Thanks for taking the time Z. Wish i had something to offer. Just not in a flow at all man!

As i say in this.."Running out of time", yet i keep feeling im waisting it...Strange.

HEY! CHEER UP BUDDY...



DACE>

You're just wore out. Take a break.
Have a couple joints and some Brenda time.

Z

Buzz would help...but its not around.
Time just ran out on that tune...
Deleted from everywhere...
HATED THAT!

I wish my other probs were that easy to slove...come to think of it, they may be.

Yep, wore out is one way to put it.
Break time.

Thanks Z.

DACE>

You took it offline before I could listen

Guess it must have "Run out of Time"