Flower's poetry thread.

[flower]

New one .. ~

I just don't know sometimes, how i feel anymore..
It's like i've never felt before and it's strange,
The willing the hoping and dreaming can never be enough..
This dreamer can't see how she does this
And it's starting to hurt more each day.
Sometimes i wish my feelings would just go away,
Then it wouldn't be so bad,
feeling happy and sad.
I don't know what's begun what will happen or where i'm from,
Thinking more i despise, when i look into your eyes,
Want you so much but can't have you,
You're someone elses and i can't have you.
I know that this is not true and want to wait forever for you,
But forever can't wait for me,
I need to be set free today of this longing that i feel for you,
Never knowing what to do.
I believe and i trust, am i stupid is this just lust?
Or real love.
What do you want, you tell me things which i think are irrelevant.
I loved you then and i love you now,
but please tell me how we're meant to be together
when you can't come, into my world to be my light, my sun.

[DACE]

Nice job Flower

I can understand some things in this.

You have Talent!!

DACE>

[flower]

Thankie dace

here's another new one i wrote the other night

thine heart is but a flower ...
it's petals dull and soft, and many a winter it waits for sunshine oft ..
So long it waits with devotion a long and painful road
But it will carry on until one day it's love takes hold
and in that sweet moment, one second seems like an hour ..
For thy heart thy soul thy mind is but that little flower.

The morrow but it comes,
the sky lightens brings the sun ..
opposeless as the new day is
nowise will that love take hold
bring thine flower to behold
the warmness of thy love .

[GinjaBug]

hi flower!

great words here! always enjoy your winding of words. truely poetic . you have a romantic and almost traditional yet abstract style in the way you word things. sets you apart

peace always

[flower]

thanks ginn

[edrury]

Yeah, what Ginnger said. I enjoy the way you mix trad and contempory giving a timeless quality to the piece. Love to hear some readings, BTW.

[DACE]

You have ALOT of TALENT with this stuff..Its wonderful to read your words.

Your my little sweety... Your magic is your words. I guess thats why i like to talk with you SO much!

We talk dirty.....And that is very cool..

Im SO glad we met.

LOVE YA!
XXX
DACE>

[flower]

I'm sure i could do a recording of me reading some of my poems
and dace ... thankyou ... all cool mang

[z]

How did I miss these poems?
Awesome!!!!

You ever try writing flash (short stories less than 1000 words)?.
I am doing it now. It is interesting.

Found a good place to submit them:

http://www.smokelong.com

One of my real life brothers is on here (lightpuddles) and writes poetry,
but he hasn't posted anything yet....

Z

[flower]

Awesome z .. thanks

[DACE]

ED would be a good one to record you some backtracks Flower..

Im sure Z would also, as I would.

Anyway... Ya gota ask tho..

DACE>

[flower]

I would be so honoured if someone wanted to do that for me... i'd be stoked as hell!!

[z]

I would be so honoured if someone wanted to do that for me... i'd be stoked as hell!!

Absolutely lovely. We will conspire to back track your words.
I think some of Dace's ambient dreamy flow would go perfect
under your words. Just ask and you shall receive. He is very fond
of you (we all are).

Z

[DACE]

Baby. Im going out NOW to record you some mellow backings.,.
Send soon...Email?? i have it i think?



ED, Do her a track mate..

Z..... you to...Orange Ibanez.. Clean...

Theres 3 tunes for you..


DACE>

[z]

Baby. Im going out NOW to record you some mellow backings.,.
Send soon...Email?? i have it i think?



ED, Do her a track mate..

Z..... you to...Orange Ibanez.. Clean...

Theres 3 tunes for you..

DACE>

absolute brother D. I will do her. Um, a track I mean.
The Artcore will be perfect for it!

Great ideas!

Z

[DACE]

Mine is ready Flower..

I cant find ya email.

Where do i send it ?

Its wonderful. You do some reading on it and it will be awesome!
Just relax, and read you stuff..

You have a Mic and all? A way to voice-over?

Need help, let me know. Or Z..

He will do one also..

FUN..

DACE>

[DACE]

Found ya email..
Sent Backing-track.



DACE>

[z]

Found ya email..
Sent Backing-track.



DACE>

Nice! I fell asleep I will have to work on it tonight....
I think she has garageband, but I'm not sure if she has an external mic or not.


Z

[flower]

Baby. Im going out NOW to record you some mellow backings.,.
Send soon...Email?? i have it i think?



ED, Do her a track mate..

Z..... you to...Orange Ibanez.. Clean...

Theres 3 tunes for you..


DACE>

Wow dace ... that's super cool of you to do that

[DACE]

Baby. Im going out NOW to record you some mellow backings.,.
Send soon...Email?? i have it i think?



ED, Do her a track mate..

Z..... you to...Orange Ibanez.. Clean...

Theres 3 tunes for you..


DACE>

Wow dace ... that's super cool of you to do that

Pretty track for you.. Dark but light also..
LOVE
Z and some will do you one also..
FLOWER TUNES!



XX
DACE>

[z]

Mine will be on the way soon Flower Chile.
Not sure what Dace did, but mine will be a 'spacy trip zone backwards blend'
for you to read poetry over in that sweet voice of yours.

Z

[flower]

Wow thankyou guys so much ... i'll do some recording over the weekend and ... wow ... this is so awesome!

[DACE]

Eds music is perfect. He needs to show up.

DACE>

[z]

Ok, mine is on the way.


Z

[DACE]

DACE>

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