i wrote a new poem

...i made it a JPG because i wanted sertain parts highlighted.

http://members.soundclick.com/shareImg/691446

bassicaly, i think the majority of us, no matter where in the world, want this on going violence to end. what is this about...? i'm so confussed! is it a religious thing? is it oil? is it something bigger? i don't know...but every life in this world is of value and we've lost to much already. and though i feel bad for those that want democracy and freedom to practice what they wish...i don't see it happening anytime soon. look @ e y gpt. i also don't think quaddofi was that ignorent. he made some good points about isrl/pal. both sides are just trying to protect themselves, though i don't agree how isrl is evicting people on a whim. pstine should work harder to become a legal country, before there is nothing left. and as for the rest, i think we should just abandon the idea of freedom for all, because not all want it. and that's what they are used to. they don't want freedom, like we don't want sha ria. this is a complex clutural clash and it is just on going... so, if the middle wants to be the next N ko rea, what can we do? we need to look inward and help our own get back on track and stop sending billions in aid to the majority that maybe hates us(i'd rather my tax money go to the indian nations and/or fixing up run down areas of our cities)...the propaganda makes it difficult to see the light(for either side) . mostly i think it's allot of government folly, but the people are being mislead...what is it about? to much contrast...and it's causing allot of hate in this world, that is so sad to me.

Nicely done, Jennifer. The way you highlighted it was perfect to showcase the poem within the poem.

Two poems for the price of one! I like that Ginn
As for all the violence in the world, I reckon a good 75% is caused by religion!!

thanks

i hope that we do not get dragged into another war...this is not about "we the people", but of control. i'm praying! praying for "peace for people"!! if we were living with and for the earth and not the money and the machine, this wouldn't be such an issue. gas will go up, and so everything else will...i'm glad i have my garden and lots of seeds.

Loving it!

Z

thanks z!!