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Post  flower on Thu Jul 02, 2009 3:56 am

New one .. ~

I just don't know sometimes, how i feel anymore..
It's like i've never felt before and it's strange,
The willing the hoping and dreaming can never be enough..
This dreamer can't see how she does this
And it's starting to hurt more each day.
Sometimes i wish my feelings would just go away,
Then it wouldn't be so bad,
feeling happy and sad.
I don't know what's begun what will happen or where i'm from,
Thinking more i despise, when i look into your eyes,
Want you so much but can't have you,
You're someone elses and i can't have you.
I know that this is not true and want to wait forever for you,
But forever can't wait for me,
I need to be set free today of this longing that i feel for you,
Never knowing what to do.
I believe and i trust, am i stupid is this just lust?
Or real love.
What do you want, you tell me things which i think are irrelevant.
I loved you then and i love you now,
but please tell me how we're meant to be together
when you can't come, into my world to be my light, my sun.

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Post  DACE on Sun Jul 05, 2009 1:42 pm

Nice job Flower flower

I can understand some things in this.

You have Talent!!

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Post  flower on Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:30 am

Thankie dace Very Happy

here's another new one i wrote the other night Smile

thine heart is but a flower ...
it's petals dull and soft, and many a winter it waits for sunshine oft ..
So long it waits with devotion a long and painful road
But it will carry on until one day it's love takes hold
and in that sweet moment, one second seems like an hour ..
For thy heart thy soul thy mind is but that little flower.

The morrow but it comes,
the sky lightens brings the sun ..
opposeless as the new day is
nowise will that love take hold
bring thine flower to behold
the warmness of thy love .

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Post  GinjaBug on Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:39 am

hi flower!

great words here! always enjoy your winding of words. truely poetic Very Happy. you have a romantic and almost traditional yet abstract style in the way you word things. sets you apart Very Happy Like a Star @ heaven I love you flower

peace always
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Post  flower on Mon Jul 06, 2009 11:16 am

thanks ginn I love you Smile

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Post  edrury on Mon Jul 06, 2009 11:19 am

Yeah, what Ginnger said. I enjoy the way you mix trad and contempory giving a timeless quality to the piece. Love to hear some readings, BTW.
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Post  DACE on Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:33 pm

You have ALOT of TALENT with this stuff..Its wonderful to read your words.

Your my little sweety...Smile Your magic is your words. I guess thats why i like to talk with you SO much!

We talk dirty.....And that is very cool..Smile

Im SO glad we met.

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Post  flower on Tue Jul 14, 2009 8:34 am

I'm sure i could do a recording of me reading some of my poems Smile
and dace ... thankyou ... all cool mang I love you

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Post  z on Tue Jul 14, 2009 9:11 am

How did I miss these poems?
Awesome!!!!

You ever try writing flash (short stories less than 1000 words)?.
I am doing it now. It is interesting.

Found a good place to submit them:

http://www.smokelong.com

One of my real life brothers is on here (lightpuddles) and writes poetry,
but he hasn't posted anything yet....

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Post  flower on Fri Jul 17, 2009 6:11 pm

Awesome z .. thanks Very Happy

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Post  DACE on Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:47 pm

ED would be a good one to record you some backtracks Flower..Smile

Im sure Z would also, as I would.

Anyway...Smile Ya gota ask tho..Smile

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Post  flower on Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:51 am

I would be so honoured if someone wanted to do that for me... i'd be stoked as hell!! Very Happy

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Post  z on Tue Jul 21, 2009 1:54 pm

flower wrote:I would be so honoured if someone wanted to do that for me... i'd be stoked as hell!! Very Happy

Absolutely lovely. We will conspire to back track your words.
I think some of Dace's ambient dreamy flow would go perfect
under your words. Just ask and you shall receive. He is very fond
of you (we all are).

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Post  DACE on Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:16 pm

flower Baby. Im going out NOW to record you some mellow backings.,.Smile
Send soon...Email?? i have it i think?



ED, Do her a track mate..Smile

Z.....Smile you to...Orange Ibanez.. Wink Clean... Wink

Theres 3 tunes for you..Smile


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Post  z on Tue Jul 21, 2009 6:54 pm

FUNGUS/DACE/OUR/SANCTUM wrote:flower Baby. Im going out NOW to record you some mellow backings.,.Smile
Send soon...Email?? i have it i think?



ED, Do her a track mate..Smile

Z.....Smile you to...Orange Ibanez.. Wink Clean... Wink

Theres 3 tunes for you..Smile

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absolute brother D. I will do her. Um, a track I mean.
The Artcore will be perfect for it!

Great ideas!

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Post  DACE on Tue Jul 21, 2009 8:18 pm

Mine is ready Flower..Smile

I cant find ya email.

Where do i send it ?

Its wonderful. You do some reading on it and it will be awesome!
Just relax, and read you stuff..Smile

You have a Mic and all? A way to voice-over?

Need help, let me know. Or Z..Smile

He will do one also..Smile

FUN..Smile

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Post  DACE on Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:38 am

Found ya email.. alien
Sent Backing-track.

cheers flower

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Post  z on Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:01 am

FUNGUS/DACE/OUR/SANCTUM wrote:Found ya email.. alien
Sent Backing-track.

cheers flower

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Nice! I fell asleep Sleep I will have to work on it tonight....
I think she has garageband, but I'm not sure if she has an external mic or not.


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Post  flower on Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:50 am

FUNGUS/DACE/OUR/SANCTUM wrote:flower Baby. Im going out NOW to record you some mellow backings.,.Smile
Send soon...Email?? i have it i think?



ED, Do her a track mate..Smile

Z.....Smile you to...Orange Ibanez.. Wink Clean... Wink

Theres 3 tunes for you..Smile


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Wow dace ... that's super cool of you to do that Smile I love you

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Post  DACE on Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:27 pm

flower wrote:
FUNGUS/DACE/OUR/SANCTUM wrote:flower Baby. Im going out NOW to record you some mellow backings.,.Smile
Send soon...Email?? i have it i think?



ED, Do her a track mate..Smile

Z.....Smile you to...Orange Ibanez.. Wink Clean... Wink

Theres 3 tunes for you..Smile


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Wow dace ... that's super cool of you to do that Smile I love you

Pretty track for you..Smile Dark but light also..Smile
LOVE
Z and some will do you one also..Smile
FLOWER TUNES!

flower flower flower

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Post  z on Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:54 pm

Mine will be on the way soon Flower Chile.
Not sure what Dace did, but mine will be a 'spacy trip zone backwards blend'
for you to read poetry over in that sweet voice of yours.

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Post  flower on Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:59 pm

Wow thankyou guys so much ... i'll do some recording over the weekend and ... wow ... this is so awesome! Wink

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Post  DACE on Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:01 pm

cheers flower

Smile

sunny

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Post  z on Thu Jul 23, 2009 10:52 pm

Ok, mine is on the way.


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Post  DACE on Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:24 am

Cool Cool Cool Cool

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