Distance Is The Enemy

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Distance Is The Enemy

Post  z on Tue Jun 30, 2009 7:14 pm

Distance IS the enemy
Faceless anonymity
All gestures unfelt and smiles unseen
until all we say and all we mean
ends up wisps of smoke on a blinking screen

For just one day I want to see
All my friends surrounding me
close enough to touch and hear
no need to translate when they are near

A wink, a nod, a silly grin
Arms stretched out, a shrug, and then
I would know just what they mean
It wouldn't be a half-told dream

That day we'd dance and sing and play
all our anger washed away
by the stream of soul and heart
And we would wish to never part

Distance IS!!!!! the enemy
Faceless anonymity
All gestures unfelt and smiles unseen
until all we say and all we mean
ends up wisps of smoke on a blinking screen



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Re: Distance Is The Enemy

Post  GinjaBug on Tue Jun 30, 2009 8:08 pm

great poem Z...love the words. it makes allot of sence to me!
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Post  KONSTRIKTION on Wed Jul 01, 2009 7:02 pm

Agree with Jennifer, Z. Love the words and the title is great! Very Happy
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Post  flower on Thu Jul 02, 2009 3:53 am

Makes a lot of sense to me too ... nice work z

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Post  DACE on Sun Jul 05, 2009 1:45 pm

YES! I know this ALL TO WELL!!!

Nice job Z!

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Re: Distance Is The Enemy

Post  z on Sun Jul 05, 2009 3:28 pm

FUNGUS/DACE/OUR/SANCTUM wrote:YES! I know this ALL TO WELL!!!

Nice job Z!

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Thanks brother Dace. Knew you could relate.
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